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2023-07-03 13:26

waste of time the author had an idea that he executed terribly the personality of the protagonist is bland and stupid besides calling him a genius the system is very confusing and cannot be fully defined

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So the protagonist reincarnates and can use bugs, but not really. First of all the protagonist lacks any background and his personality is unexplained, he is supposedly intelligent but instead come across as childish and his emotions are exaggerated. He allows others like his friends to disrespect him constantly calling him "Bug man" and say that his bugs are ugly despite his clan's respect for bugs, but doesn't do or say anything. The interactions are awkward and the details and explanations are way to dragged out to the point of tedium, especially when the protagonist's thoughts are poorly written, repeated many times or fail to make any sense. And then his 'Zerg Domnitor system' is a mess, apparently he gains a bloodline from this system which should have been an ability to better control bugs, not a bloodline itself, and it would have made more sense to gain bloodlines and abilities from the bugs. His bugs can evolve but how is that possible when he still has the original bugs? He claims that six months is too little time even though he can evolve his bugs in mere hours, and there's no explanation as to whether the new bugs that are bred have their genes evolve or if their Chakra can increase. And how can bugs use his own biomass after he eats food? The system becomes even more confusing when he mentions that "parasitic insects can help convert organic matters into biomass, but the insects themselves don't have a biomass storage. The drone has its own biomass storage and can be used autonomously to harvest resources." Then it follows some weird Starcraft logic where everything revolves around a Zerg, and where he starts sacrificing bugs and biomass to create a drone bug, structures, and hatcheries, withoit clear explanation. Then his drone bug takes the route of "Once I revert to an egg, I must bury myself underground for three years. There my form matures" and starts digging in the middle of the village.

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