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Diznattsu
DiznattsuLv31yr
2023-07-24 14:46

This has the potential to be a Great novel, However as I've read and read through the chapters, I can't seem to help but notice in every paragraph there's an exclamation point (!). Now that may be intended but I find it quite annoying to read pass through, I hope the author would lessen the exclamation points (!) for a better coherent quality since it nessesary doesn't have to be on every paragraph. Overall, I quite like the Story Building and the World Background of this novel, the characters are unique and I'm a sucker for anti-hero protagonists.Definitely a 10/10!

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SaintOfDarkness
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Oh I got it, so, thank you for your suggest! I will make it better on the next chapter!

Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

How large is the harem going to be

SaintOfDarkness:Oh I got it, so, thank you for your suggest! I will make it better on the next chapter!
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