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PrimordialKiller
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2023-09-09 04:57

I like this book ❤️😁.... I have deducted star from your updating stability only ... Every version of this book has been improving rapidly ... Love you Author 😚💗💗💗

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False_Sage
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Are you sure about that??

PrimordialKiller
PrimordialKillerLv13

yeah 👍 ... this book just need some character development aside from the main character 's perspective ... Your world background look good at first but you need to develop its surroundings like cities ... Please explain the beauties and ugliness of demon, elves and human etc. major cities ... But above all these are my personal recommendation so just take my word and do what you want to write ✍️✍️

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