Review Detail of Kitoku in [The Final Ashfield]

Shameless review, but as we go through the story, I will be updating my thoughts on my writing skill per arc! I also do want to stress that comments and reviews are something I'd really like and want to see alot of, good or bad; So please comment more! Up to Xastol City so far, I think the Worldbuilding with the dwarven clan and the Ashfield brothers meeting draw us into a world of magic that allows the reader to understand more about the origins of the characters than their actual current actions. I want this to be more of a backstory driven, plot focused, exposition arc. So for worldbuilding so far, I'd say its pretty good, however, since it's only a fraction of the world so far, I'll rate it a 3. As for chapter stability, chapters will be much more frequent(1-2 posts a day) and so I'll give it a 4 rating for now(Don't beat me up if that changes XD) Story development so far is mainly focused on exposition and explaining the bare bones about the world the two brothers have discovered outside of the Axis. I'd say we haven't covered much, other than the power system, so I'll give that a 3 as well. Character design? Hey, what can I say. I love swagged out characters and I hope to make everyone unique and cool in their own quirky way. So with no bias whatsoever(XD), I'm giving character designs a 4. Let me know if you agree or disagree!!!