sorry but the mc announces too much info that he shouldn't have, and in the life of HP there is no job that you learn like magic even there you have to work so his craft is too much to do directly, I drop the story (chapter 30) it's not consistent enough with the world of HP (and the mc is stupid)
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LIKEsorry for not having responded, so you say it's improving, but brother, it was 30 chapters when I gave up xD it's not nothing how many more chapters I have to wait, and I also have to forget all the inconsistencies what did I quote? continuing a story with so many flaws because it ended up being better is not the right answer.
Ankit_Mourya_1249:read ahead it gets better and fanfics are meant to be different from canon. I like the Mc.
"and in the life of HP there is no job that you learn like magic even there you have to work so his craft is too much to do directly" That doesn't make sense. Both in that there is nothing in the books or lore that indicates what I think you're trying to say and in that your wording is very hard to comprehend and borders on nonsensical gibberish.
midgetydeath:"and in the life of HP there is no job that you learn like magic even there you have to work so his craft is too much to do directly" That doesn't make sense. Both in that there is nothing in the books or lore that indicates what I think you're trying to say and in that your wording is very hard to comprehend and borders on nonsensical gibberish.
Benoit_Valtin:sorry for not having responded, so you say it's improving, but brother, it was 30 chapters when I gave up xD it's not nothing how many more chapters I have to wait, and I also have to forget all the inconsistencies what did I quote? continuing a story with so many flaws because it ended up being better is not the right answer.