Review Detail of Zephyra_0722 in bigVillain

The draft is an interesting concept that combines the idea of traveling to a new world with the theme of being a villain. The protagonist, Amit, finds himself in a world where his family is powerful and influential, but he is destined to be the villain in the story. However, he discovers that he can gain "villain points" by taking away the protagonist's luck, which can lead to various magical skills. The idea of a villain system that rewards bad behavior is intriguing and adds an element of excitement to the story. The draft also sets up potential conflicts between Amit and the protagonist, as well as his own family, who may end up being his stepping stones. Overall, the concept has a lot of potential for an entertaining and engaging story, with a unique twist on the traditional hero/villain dynamic. However, it would be interesting to see how the author develops the characters and the world-building, as well as the consequences of Amit's actions as a villain.