Excellent writing, the flow are smooth and the emotion in it also got me. Great job. The dark opening is just, wow, gripping. update stability, 1 chap/day, nice, target achieved, keep this up. Not much can be concluding from this early chaps, but looking at how the scene and dialogue were fleshed out, it has clear direction ahead. Synopsys, you could improve that, the current one is vague, give nothing about the plot of the story, the background of the mc, etc. It's like telling the reader what will they go through in this story. Overall, awesome, keep updating!

I have read the four chapters and I really like it. Setting and the word usage/ description are just purr fect. I also like the suspense feel that I get from this. So author continue I want to see what happens next

This is a carefully written story. You can tell that by how it unfolds. It has a good use of flashbacks and fast-forwards that help create tension and suspense, quietly enticing you in. It has a good plot, and I appreciate the depth of the characters. It is very descriptive, which gives you an immersive reading experience. Ethan is a lovely soul, as are Henry and Janet. I didn't give 5 on updates, cause I noticed the chapters are released several days apart. Thats the reason for 4.8.

This is pretty great. I love Ethan he is definitely relateable. This book is fast paced, and definitly has moments of suspense.

Four chapters in and I think it's a solid start. The wordings were well chosen and the settings were described well. People who like this genre are likely to stay. Kudos!

Alright, alright, just the beginning alone got be hooked... Well why wouldn't it, it a horror and thriller novel, definitely my cup of tea, I love the characters, mostly Ethan for now.. he is definitely relatable, as for the book, the dark aura and suspense got me hungry for more.. Just seven chapters, yet this book as already got it all, a true gem.. Author please do keep on updating.. I don't think I would be able to control the yearning for this book any longer, lol 😂😂.. Perfect five star rating

Very intriguing style of progression and writing. Like the setting, a very interesting concept that in my opinion bars between horror and thriller. Characters are fleshed out, just enough for readers to understand them. Will recommend for those that like mysteries

What a fantastic story! The events are as fast as they should be, you used an inclusive description to make readers enter the world of the story. Also, I liked Ethan very much, he is strong and determined, and I am eager to discover what's gonna happen in the next chapters.

I loved the solid start. The story is gripping and the author keeps you in suspense the whole time. I look forward to seeing what happens to this group of three. The only thing that was a bit confusing to me was why the names were in the brackets in Chapter 4.