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HyperMan07
HyperMan07Lv41yr
2023-06-20 20:38

The mc is so pathetic..I almost puke just by reading 2 chapters..honestly😞

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Lyriryl
LyrirylAuthor

Thank you for your honest review. But I just wanted to ask something, what did you expect to see first when you read the titleπŸ˜‚. Just curious.

Genesis_999
Genesis_999Lv2

A beta sim p like you will only create a character similar to you I mean just because a guy is vir gin doesn’t mean he has to shutter like a buff on can’t he talk atleast normally my god and blushing like a damsel

Lyriryl:Thank you for your honest review. But I just wanted to ask something, what did you expect to see first when you read the titleπŸ˜‚. Just curious.
Lyriryl
LyrirylAuthor

I wanted to reply to you seriously at first, but when I saw your history and found out that all you do is just trash-talk other people's work, I found it hard to take you seriously at all You are not worth my time!

Genesis_999:A beta sim p like you will only create a character similar to you I mean just because a guy is vir gin doesn’t mean he has to shutter like a buff on can’t he talk atleast normally my god and blushing like a damsel
Genesis_999
Genesis_999Lv2

Here you go trash I do give stars to novel who actually deserve it but since I keep finding trash novels from lowlifes like you everytime it just piles my profile with 1 stars

Lyriryl:I wanted to reply to you seriously at first, but when I saw your history and found out that all you do is just trash-talk other people's work, I found it hard to take you seriously at all You are not worth my time!
Genesis_999
Genesis_999Lv2

Seriously you ret ar ded bu ff on the author himself said he will be like that no character development and it even has n t r. You a cu ck?

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HyperMan07
HyperMan07Lv4

The moment he cried when he got rejected and tried to force himself on her was the moment I deemed this novel as a waste..

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Genesis_999
Genesis_999Lv2

Yeah that’s what a cu ck would say you trash mo n gr el

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Genesis_999
Genesis_999Lv2

To begin with I wouldn’t even start liking that kind of person so much less to loving them l o l. I ain’t a be ta cu ck like you who si mps for a bi tc h just cause they’re beautiful. And if I did get betrayed it was my fault to even choose, trust and like that kind of person and then just move on. I mean what’s the point of crying? I’m pretty sure I wouldn’t be obsessed much less seriously genuinely love someone if they themselves aren’t obsessed with me.

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Genesis_999
Genesis_999Lv2

This fc king retar ded trash my god Lo l yeah so when did I ever say it isn’t fine to use the ex girlfriend leaving the m c for a rich Chinese trope. I said this was a trash be ta si mp cu ck novel just like you bro

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Genesis_999
Genesis_999Lv2

Umm what? You were the cu ck here you di sgu sting low life so what you on about now? You are the one who is a trash cu ck author’s bi t ch who is going on trash talking to people who are actually reviewing honestly so get a life you da mn fi l thy cu ck

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Genesis_999
Genesis_999Lv2

It's seems you are more or beyond ret arde d then I assumed. I don't know who you are talking about but I'm talking about the gy a ru so who are you talking about?

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Genesis_999
Genesis_999Lv2

Read ch 1 you re ta rded trash

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Genesis_999
Genesis_999Lv2

Ohh so now that you know you are the cu ck and the one in the wrong here instead of apologizing you are bar king like a dog typical low life mon gr el

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Lyriryl
LyrirylAuthor

To everyone reading this, just remember, I never answered to this guy not even once. I am a man of my word when I say he isn't worth my time

Genesis_999:Seriously you ret ar ded bu ff on the author himself said he will be like that no character development and it even has n t r. You a cu ck?
Lyriryl
LyrirylAuthor

I'll fix the first chaps. I was still very new with writing at the time.

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Genesis_999
Genesis_999Lv2

Who said you answered to me? Si gh ret ards of low life ba nd ed in the same place why you so il ite rate even when your parents spend money to send you to school what a waste of sp er m

Lyriryl:To everyone reading this, just remember, I never answered to this guy not even once. I am a man of my word when I say he isn't worth my time
Mr_hypocrite
Mr_hypocriteLv4

why so 😀?

Genesis_999:Who said you answered to me? Si gh ret ards of low life ba nd ed in the same place why you so il ite rate even when your parents spend money to send you to school what a waste of sp er m
Lyriryl
LyrirylAuthor

Not everyone starts out as a giga Chad and there's nothing I can do about that. that's just how the story is. I even added the weak to strong tag. thanks anyway.

HyperMan07:The moment he cried when he got rejected and tried to force himself on her was the moment I deemed this novel as a waste..
Genesis_999
Genesis_999Lv2

Sure trash I do that cause I can’t stomach these cu ck f ckers and no I’ve a life and earn big money unlike you and these cu cks so yeah I only mention or call cu cks mon g rel and lowl life? Why so mad Lo l? Is this trash author your father?

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Genesis_999
Genesis_999Lv2

Okay I guess I can clarify a little bit on how I’ve so much time to read novels when I’m already working so I’m 19 rn and am working with my father and helping manage his various businesses that’s why I said I do earn big and I’ve quite the free time so I read or would just be surfing the webs to find something good

Genesis_999:Sure trash I do that cause I can’t stomach these cu ck f ckers and no I’ve a life and earn big money unlike you and these cu cks so yeah I only mention or call cu cks mon g rel and lowl life? Why so mad Lo l? Is this trash author your father?
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