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2023-05-03 13:15

This is surely interesting! Love to know where the author will lead us to in her story. My only concern is that the view of the storyline goes from a first person view to a third person view within a paragraph ever so often. It gets kind of confusing but it is manageable. It doesn’t really hurt the story that much. Overall the story has a great potential and should be added to your library‼️

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