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Iteq24_24
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2023-04-28 05:23

I hope you keep it up author I wouldn't want this story to just dissappear

This platform has soul!

Charlottess
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Raymond_Hall
Raymond_HallLv15

writing needs work, lots of common errors, but the concept is nice and looking forward to the story, hope it doesn't get dropped.

1yr

Skill_Top
Skill_TopLv1

I don't like the main character a naive kind person I don't know how you can be so naive and stupid. …………………………………………………………………………..,.,,..,,,..,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,

1yr
Sandman41
Sandman41Lv15

A Great AU set in the Mass Effect Universe.

1yr
name1681
name1681Lv14

Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work.

1yr
Bryce_Todhunter
Bryce_TodhunterLv4

I'd like to see more chapters of the story

6mth
William_Snovelle
William_SnovelleLv14

Grammar needs some work not too much, until such happens readers will need to compensate a little, but it will be easy. Yall will love it I promise especially the ending. Ttfn!

1yr
Nightwolf2728
Nightwolf2728Lv4

I'm disappointed this FF doesn't have more power stones and five-star reviews. This FF is amazing, and I hope more people give it a chance.

1yr
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