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2023-05-25 23:27

I think is a good idea with a lot of potential but it needs some polishing Note to Auther: One easy thing to do is to define speech Harry said "Hello" Liz said "Morning Harry" It would make it a lot clearer when and who is speaking. Typical "is used for speech" and 'is used for thoughts'

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I don't argue, but it's too tedious. It's easier to imagine in your head who is saying what. Even in ordinary classical literature, they don't use the type of dialogue you suggested.

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but you must look at some factors, for example the average audience of readers is 12 to 20 something. In that sense dialogues like using "..." works best with this audience, in fact classical literature also uses this type of dialogue.

Charlottess:I don't argue, but it's too tedious. It's easier to imagine in your head who is saying what. Even in ordinary classical literature, they don't use the type of dialogue you suggested.
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The idea has a lot of potential, but is poorly executed. The author is hampered by poor English comprehension and grammar. I highly recommend using grammarly or even chatGPT to edit.

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