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Walentine1
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hello, this was a wonderful read. however, i'd like to suggest the author to work on his writing skills. you can try separating paragraphs... and work a little on punctuations. but overall, i enjoyed reading it a lot. thank you! i'll keep reading further!

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RESEARCHING THE HEAVENLY LAWS

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The_Asce_Himself
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This novel would be better in third POV