Review Detail of MellyK9 in Harbingers Of Death

Alright, I read chapter 15, and it became borderline unbearable. First of all, the character interactions are dry and seem to be rushed. Second, the MC is unbearable and a complete simp, from the second he met Hilary (his real crush that just happens to conveniently be in the same area as him from the thousands that just randomly spawn in. Plus, his friend is trapped in the game too, but this rich girl who has never interacted with him before is more important). He shows her his secret abilities and grants her free power-ups for no reason besides him being an imbecile. And he has absolutely no sense of danger. He is not at all worried about being stuck in a world forever and just immediately gets over it.