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seabas_ippoLv131yr
2023-08-06 11:00

Grammar is mucho malo. The premise of the story is pretty nice it’s giving me a arifureta vibes. The story is pretty nice but it has a single issue the writing quality and that is a deal breaker.

Devil's Cry

PrinceClover
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PrinceClover
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I don't think so something is wrong with my grammar. iirc, I edited it in grammarly. But I do admit in my writing quality.That time, I was reading Shadow Slave, and mine is an only a cheap imitation of his writing style.But i assure you I changed it but only ina hundred plus later. Though, I I'm pretty sure my writing quality is not really bad. That's why I'm baffled by what you meant, or maybe because the writing style is not your taste. Nonetheless, thank you for reading and giving reviews. Still, I reject the reviews about the writing quality, but I will not delete this.

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