Review Detail of DaoistJhtAYc in Uchiha's Enigma
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Almost everything is good, especially the writing but some random oddities stick out, like the fact that he somehow ran into random enemy ninjas but for some odd reason no one used any type of jutsu whatsoever throughout the whole fight which makes no sense, why would you let someone hit you instead of using a substitution jutsu. Other than that it’s pretty good so far and the MC is interesting too but you should also inform readers that it’s an Alternative Universe since people might complain in the future about Madura being alive and just chilling in the village.
Uchiha's Enigma
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Thanks for the review. If you read on, you'll understand why they didn't use any jutsus. As for Madara chilling in the village; the story is set in the time period when the leaf had just been founded by the Uchiha and Senju clans. Madara didn't leave the village until a bit after the election of the first Hokage so it shouldn't be strange that he's in the village. The only non-canon thing is probably the fact that he has children and grandchildren.
Ahhh okay that makes sense. Honestly it seemed like the storyline was closer to the canon storyline, well not that close but it seemed like a time after Madara wasn’t a part of the village that’s why I thought it was more of a au. And I will continue reading to see the explanation.
Nerivenu:Thanks for the review. If you read on, you'll understand why they didn't use any jutsus. As for Madara chilling in the village; the story is set in the time period when the leaf had just been founded by the Uchiha and Senju clans. Madara didn't leave the village until a bit after the election of the first Hokage so it shouldn't be strange that he's in the village. The only non-canon thing is probably the fact that he has children and grandchildren.
Nerivenu:Thanks for the review. If you read on, you'll understand why they didn't use any jutsus. As for Madara chilling in the village; the story is set in the time period when the leaf had just been founded by the Uchiha and Senju clans. Madara didn't leave the village until a bit after the election of the first Hokage so it shouldn't be strange that he's in the village. The only non-canon thing is probably the fact that he has children and grandchildren.