A great story so far, the mc isn't too passive nor is he overly aggressive. He thinks about his future, but he isn't perfect. He's relatable in the choices he makes. He's extremely powerful, but not overly busted. He doesn't abuse what he's got either, all in all, the dude is okay
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LIKEpricefree:Not gonna lie, your review is top tier. Absolutely hilarious and a nice change from authors giving themselves 5 stars and saying “I’m biased, give me stones!”
Psan:So.... Who is his woman? Since hârêm tag is not there i suppose he chooses one of the girls or an original character. So which is it?
I hope the other chapters have better English. The first one has straight up missing words and incorrect tense usage.
PettiaMius_6689:when you know bro, you know 'insert smiley face'
it gets better, ill be going over the story to recheck too, but the missing words sounds like a mobile trying to pick up special characters issue
Chaddts:I hope the other chapters have better English. The first one has straight up missing words and incorrect tense usage.
RavenClock:I don't mean to offend But GOD is that picture disturbing