Review Detail of Unstable_Mind in Starting The Group Chat With Solo Players

for writing quality; the writing is not bad yet, there are still some confusing sentences. for stability of update; I do not know because I read the story in this latest form/complete form. for story development; the story twist the reader to find bizarre scenes. It indeed also has a quick pace of movement in my opinion, going from human to saint is an example. for character design; the character in my own opinion are greatly made, the psychopath, the bro-con, the overthinking. the confusion, hatred and love in a character on telling on the creative mind of the writer. for world background; I don't know what to give on these.