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Jonny_Mad
Jonny_MadLv151yr
2023-09-29 18:35

the story seems interesting but the writing quality it's not up to par a lot of repetition and confusion. need polish and editing to reach a minimum standard of quality. I hope to re-read this story in the future when is fixed.

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Brezer
BrezerLv14

yep, it annoys me when people throw the pay wall up, and the grammar is terrible, and they repost a quarter of the previous chapter for word count. cool concept, terrible delivery, and grammar

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