It’s pretty decently written novel in all fairness, there is just a few grammatical and spelling mistakes here and there. I like the general idea, the concept of the story is what made me read it, I just don’t like the way it was delivered. Unfortunately, I find the novel hard to read, I strongly dislike the MC. It is written from his perspective and he asks the most bizarre and stupid questions. He knows the lore, he knows the plot and knows he is a slave but still questions why he was brought to the “Madam’s” room… really, is it not obvious? The system appears in one chapter and then vanishes… poof, gone. Unfortunately, the plot progression and the MC makes it difficult to read on, this is one for the masochists out there. Plus, there’s Yuri (don’t know if this continues) not interested, if he can’t pleasure women with his so called massive wang, he may as well not have it. Anyway… good luck author, all the best 😊👍🏻
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LIKEYes it should, especially for people who don’t read properly. I don’t think I remember saying you can’t pleasure a woman with a wang or not. This novel makes a big commotion about the wang being massive but still adds Yuri, maybe it’s just me but it feels a little… silly. His redeeming quality can be outshined by a woman and her fingers.
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