Intriguing and suspenseful beginning. The element of mystery keeps you on edge. Love Christoph's character too. Decisive and strong and it will be thrilling to see what secrets he will learn behind the antagonists' plan and how he will avenge his parents' death. The conversation in the 3rd chapter between Christoph and the mysterious voice in the dark world was really intriguing too. The author's writing style and command on English is good and I didn't find any grammatical mistakes as such. It was a smooth read. I like the pacing of chapters, not too fast or too slow. The writing flow is well maintained. The emotional and background descriptions are well balanced as well. It was neither too long to make me skip it nor too short to feel something lacking. All in all an enjoyable read and hope to see the plot turning more interesting as more chapters come in. All the best for your book 👍
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