Author, your novel isn’t bad, but the problem is in the MC’s personality. I understand that many like an MC with a hero complex, respectful of elders and have a moral bottom line, but I came for the ‘’VILLAIN’’ tag. I want to read about an MC who will do anything to gain more power, a MC who would slaughter every creature in the universe to gain power, but what am I currently reading? A 30-year-old MC who behaves like a golden retriever wanting attention….
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LIKEThat's great news, I'm deleting the review so as not to hurt your novel's grade. I'm waiting for this part where the MC will always prioritize the benefits
Infinity_09:my guy this is going to be a pretty long book, the protagonist doesn't directly become a villain for no reason although I know there are some books where it happens right off the bat. It's not gonna happen till about chapter 70's roughly