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AgniFaradel
AgniFaradelLv21yr
2023-04-28 14:53

The MC is not an average man, he is an idiot, only idiots surround themselves solely and exclusively with bootlickers, in this case slaves. I don't mind the brainwashing, or any villain tropes, but the mc isn't written as a villain, just a jerk. Your novel is good, your mc is... God, it's disgusting

Average man in TDG

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