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Nightsking
NightskingLv11yr
2023-05-13 16:01

The author asked for comments and instead I one up him with a review! Don't have anything substantial to say the the story is just great at the moment with only 13 chapters. But I like the way it is written and how it is going so far. Really curious for what is going to happen in the future!

Undertale: The Scientist

BoredMansDream
4.6
23 Chs

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GeeGeeTeeWuu
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this seems to be going well so far, other than a few misspellings that can easily be ignored. I really like this.

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Ouroboros_Outings
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Reveal spoiler

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CZFanficsDelta
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The story is good, even more so that it is from undertale where there are almost no stories about it, the only problem would be that I got confused throughout the story due to the timeline but it is explained over time so I have no problems, great story and thanks for keep writing!!

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The_Pope_Of_Coom
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Since there are only 5 chapters, its a little difficult to get an ideal gauge on the story, but from what there IS to read, it seems to be a decently impressive novel, especially considering the fact that it appears to be a little more than just a stupid “wish fulfillment” story. There is an actual change in the timeline, maiing the story less predictable, there are few writing mistakes, and the few mistakes that are there are so unnoticeable that it barely changes the story. There is an actual prologue that explains ehy the protagonist does certain things such as kill without feeling, and it seems to be updated frequently, even though there isnt a set schedule. Tl:Dr: all in all, its well written and worthy of a collection so that you can keep an eye on the future story.

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FandomExplorer_2nd
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*Shrug* you know undertale always have a special place on my read list.. even though some of them is kinda.. weird.. (This fanfic is good).........

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It's well written but I'm not a fan of Psychopath MC's

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KingPumpkin3
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Love it I have never seen an undertale fan fix on Webnovel like this

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Captain_Chase
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Really love this story hope it isn’t dropped I like this author a lot hope you come back from whatever happend

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good novel but the author i think dropped this

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