Review Detail of daygon_yuuki in Controller of the Battlefield
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Pardon me. I'm just a based writer here. It's my first time writing a real-world story and especially one like this. But that being said, I hope I can deliver a nice story to you. I do play a lot and I am involved in a lot of background export community but I have never participated in a live match above locals. If I get some things wrong, please pardon me. This is based on a fictional story. Also, for all the grammatical mistakes, please point out. I'm a busy human and mistakes skip past me sometimes. That being said, if you are interested in proofreading future chapters early, do hit me up on Discord. My discord tag is in the story summary.
Controller of the Battlefield
daygon_yuuki
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Pxzmen:i really don't like combine redo and normal life ,it so unilogic . i mean who make him back to time ? it never have logic you could say that he dream about future but who believe that. i rather to believe that the MC is a genius gamer instead
can you create a new story that is antiharem. story about a man that transmigrator into a reality with a heaven defining ability (cheat code) he conquers everything. when he reached the peak of his life. he discover another word Invaders a creatures from other realities. before the battle even began he was betrayed by his heroines then he discovered that all the heaven defining ability that he have. was given to him by the another invaders. with the last strength he has. he escaped the battlefield and fled because he don't have enough life force. but before he died he choose to create a system. a system that is going to help he's host to get more power so he use his having defining ability and the will of his own reality and other word reality. this is just the beginning of the story you can choose how the story will go and how is going to end I hope you like it this is just the creation of the system so you can make the system so overpowered please. antiharem please
Chimee_Chieke:can you create a new story that is antiharem. story about a man that transmigrator into a reality with a heaven defining ability (cheat code) he conquers everything. when he reached the peak of his life. he discover another word Invaders a creatures from other realities. before the battle even began he was betrayed by his heroines then he discovered that all the heaven defining ability that he have. was given to him by the another invaders. with the last strength he has. he escaped the battlefield and fled because he don't have enough life force. but before he died he choose to create a system. a system that is going to help he's host to get more power so he use his having defining ability and the will of his own reality and other word reality. this is just the beginning of the story you can choose how the story will go and how is going to end I hope you like it this is just the creation of the system so you can make the system so overpowered please. antiharem please
he use extremity treasure and the system that the aliens have given to him with the wheel of reality of the two new world. to refine the new system.
Creator_of_Chaos:How did he make a system if he used the last of his power to escape
he use extremity treasure and the system that the aliens have given to him with the wheel of reality of the two new world. to refine the new system. . a boy from earth. he got transmigrated and band with the system because he's compatible with the system he antiharam. the system is also a hundred percent loyal to him because there is no other hand controlling the system behind the scene because the creator is dead also. even if the creator revive he has no authority over the system. because that is how he created it. he doesn't want what happened to him to happened to another. you can make the story about him for him to get power like from e rank to reality rank. that power he can leave his own cosmos to go to other realities. or you can turn it into the level 1 to any level. or you can turn it into a cultivation world. I don't really know how it works on cultivation
daygon_yuuki:Its a little (lot) different from your synopsisimage
That's the problem. Genius is such a troubling word. And harder to justify in stories. Like if the MC makes some mistake or makes a dumb decision... People just chew you out on that point. On the other hand, regressed or say travelled back in time theme, is much easier to explain. And relatable to the common reader? Yeah that's correct.
Pxzmen:i really don't like combine redo and normal life ,it so unilogic . i mean who make him back to time ? it never have logic you could say that he dream about future but who believe that. i rather to believe that the MC is a genius gamer instead
