The synopsis sounded good but the FL does not act like anyone who’s been kidnapped and married off against her will. There are no true attempts at escape, struggle or even resistance which would make her more credible. Instead all she does is think about how good looking her kidnapper/captor is, although none of his actions indicate sincerity at this point. I get love stories starting from Stockholm syndrome on WN, but this FL isn’t acting like a princess who was taken against her wishes and made a forced bride. Or even a regular woman who’s been kidnapped. Still have hopes for the magic parts of the story though! But her reactions make the impending romance seem really insincere/contrived
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LIKEhonestly, i think her lack of attempt to escape makes a bit of sense considering she's incredibly insecure, has been told pretty much her whole life that she's useless, and she really has nowhere to go. Her behavior was pretty consistent at the beginning and we could see her grow into herself, however i will say that she got emotionally attatched pretty quickly