Review Detail of Mr_Jak in I have cheat skill in Warhammer 40k

Honestly, the context of the story is fine, but the story is basically a summary of everything that happens, there is no dialogue between the characters, it's just the description of what they do, don't feel the distrust that Warhammer people would probably have towards the protagonist (especially because in warhammer people distrust even his shadow and not to mention the imperial cult, almost anything that is out of the ordinary is heresy), there is no character development or description of his equipment, actions or interactions with other characters this story is basically a summary