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2024-07-26 17:49

Honestly, everything is fine, but novel is too how should I put this emotional it's like I'm reading a family drama genre kinda of novel i mean the kingdom building process requires sacrifices especially for gods who are constantly up to spread their influence which the MC and don't seem to up for the task all I'm seeing is family this family that with little scheming nothing much as it's focusing much on their little family relationship when the plot seems to be to big for such matters I'm worried if we're ever going to advances like conquests and all as the plot seems to be too thick [universal] and the author focuses on not so important things like family drama's and all they're acting like modern day normal human family instead of ancient gods beings that are supposed to lead and protect their people from threats which are at their back yards

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