I have read up until chapter 104, For me the story is good but I have some notes. 1- Lack of fights, The Mc spawns already powerful but he doesn't get into serious fights that often ( The only serious fight is with barragan) but I kinda understand this since with his power it's hard to find powerful opponent until he waits for the canon to start ( he's born 50 years before canon) 2-His harem, His harem is actually well wrote and have actual developments but from what I see his women serve no purpose to that story other than being a romantic interest or for funny moments ( Apart from the shark lady they are all fodders and follow MC'S desicions) 3-Slow pace which isn't a huge problem but 99% of the chapters are about his harem without any developments of the story outside it. 4- His myestries , A lot of things about the MC are left unexplained, like his system or his zanbakuto which is good but with 100 chapters down the line without any explaination is not a good thing in my opinion. The only thing that will make the story better in my opinion is to lessen the attention on the women outside or inside his harem, And focus on the MC, like his plans or strength or the development in general and explain his power and their nature and have him engage in actual fights. With the pace we are going with I'd say canon will start in chapter 200
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