the writing is really good and I'm immerse in the story ๐๐๐my only problem is the fact that he comes from the modern world but doesn't have any knowledge of the Naruto world ๐๐๐at this point you should have simply use a chakra theme cultivation world instead ๐๐๐ anyway apart from that it's a good read๐๐๐
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