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Arrowinmyknee
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World: MHA, Wish: Nanomachines, Quirk he was born with: Telekinesis. Suddenly he pulls qi cultivation, Mental Energy, Telepathy, Pyrokinesis, Blablakinesis, and so on out if his ass. This makes no fucking sense and makes the story just a senseless mess of powers without a real explanation. Martial Arts is basically Cultivation is not an explanation. I predict this story won't go far be it popularity or the Author himself, he will have trouble to keep track of what his MC can do since it doesn't make any sense. Writing Quality: 3/5 Readable with Mistakes Story Development: 1/5 Have all Powers now Canon starts isn't a Story. Character Design: 1/5 The MC is plain hasn't much depth, keeps distance from others, Powers are the only thing he has. We don't really know what he even wants. Update Stability: 3/5 Fresh story but doesn't give confidence of going anywhere. World Background: 1/5 For it being a MHA fiction not much to do with Quirks or Heros besides the MC randomly proclaiming he wants to be a Hero without a reason, or suddenly also needing a Villain Identity. More a cultivation Story with random powers.

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ShadowStalker
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dude it's been 11 months! Magus in Wizarding World was the first thing I read on Webnovel and it was really good? You spend all this time critiquing other peoples' stories. Build up some motivation and WRITE again!

holosagewolf32
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Your alive? At this point i thought you passed away. I miss your novel greatly