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Review Detail of MonstruoDormido in A Serpent's Tale

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so yeah formally I have to say the story is good... for the majority maybe? I don't know, you just see for yourself men... this may be a spoiler to some but I didn't put the spoiler tag on purpose to let you know the things above. If you want to read yourself and see what I've seen in the book then don't read beyond this POINT. But if you are keen on knowing how I feel about it then— read the paragraphs below... How frustrating. so its basically one of those tales where the mc and the other character sits around a born fire and have a conversation: "Hey remember that time I helped people who tortured you for months because of my selfish reason, and you forgave me in one day because of a stupid reason?". The other replies, "yeah I remember, even my father saved your daughter as if he's repaying you for saving me— when you were saving me to repay for my miserly. Come to think of it, who was repaying who?" The other replies again, "I'm not sure, but I'm glad you forgave like a moron." thats how the story is... The mc gets tortured because of some guy helping his daughter. Then the mc just gets a little sad or angry and forgives them... as far as I could read which was stupid and frustrating considering that no one who is reasonable can do so... which bring us to character development needing reasonable improvement. at leas it must make sense like how a living being would act.

A Serpent's Tale

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Thanks for the feedback! I’ll try to do better in the future, but if you have any tips on how I can improve, that would be great appreciated!