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The stencil system is already good enough, adding the most absurd 100x power there is to the story. The subject of books with 100x power has to enter a dead end at a certain point.
In Naruto With Minato Template
kamidemond
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no you don't I read Patr.e.o.n it's more of the same stupidity this, boring plot that, pedophilia here and a waste of time there. and the only way to fix the story is to quit and start over
kamidemond:don't worry I have a way to handle that đ
woh really. where you thing I have made a mistake please point out i will try extra hard to fix that
DragonslayerKnight:no you don't I read Patr.e.o.n it's more of the same stupidity this, boring plot that, pedophilia here and a waste of time there. and the only way to fix the story is to quit and start over
it's multiple mistakes in every chapter. from grammar, punctuation, misspelled words, words used incorrectly, words used that need more content or context to explain the use in that way. the system is inconsistent as well as the world background. I'm supposed to believe that this world is a darker place than Cannon, yet crystal ball Sarutobi and the one eyed crippled stalk er never noticed the son of the 4th and brother to Naruto training abilities he shouldn't have access to, or the overly large chakra reserves that he gained in One day without explanation. the entire story is a mosh pit of inconsistencies and an author's incompetence at maintaining a story plot
kamidemond:woh really. where you thing I have made a mistake please point out i will try extra hard to fix that
DragonslayerKnight:it's multiple mistakes in every chapter. from grammar, punctuation, misspelled words, words used incorrectly, words used that need more content or context to explain the use in that way. the system is inconsistent as well as the world background. I'm supposed to believe that this world is a darker place than Cannon, yet crystal ball Sarutobi and the one eyed crippled stalk er never noticed the son of the 4th and brother to Naruto training abilities he shouldn't have access to, or the overly large chakra reserves that he gained in One day without explanation. the entire story is a mosh pit of inconsistencies and an author's incompetence at maintaining a story plot