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2023-06-24 00:28

Writing the review once again after 70 chapters. Firstly let's talk about pros. 1. The story seems fresh which doesn't follow the generic novel theme of making the mc overpowered without any reason. 2. All the supporting characters seems to have their own backstory, which gives a sense of familiarity to the reader instead of just considering them as extra characters. 3. The writing quality so far is good with very little grammatical errors, which is hard to find in webnovel these days. 4. THIS NOVEL IS NOT HAREM. 5. The author is very interactive, listen to his readers and takes suggestions which are very good from my perspective. Now coming to the cons. 1. Some two chapters from the novel seem very familiar to a certain novel, although the author has corrected himself and is developing his own story, I had to mention that. 2. The story progress is very slow, which may lead the readers to annoyance. 3. The author tends to repeat the MC goals every now and then which may seem very repetitive. That's all. This is my view of the novel. I would say pretty good, a solid 9/10.Let's see how the story progress and I will be back to write the review once again after 150 chapters. Good luck author keep up the good work.

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