The story has a lot of potential. The writing quality is quite good, just a few errors here and there. I however have a problem with the amount or how the dialogue tags are used. It disturbs the readers imaginative process... I can feel the presence of the author.. Good world background and good charcter design Overall I do recommend the book❤️
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