Review Detail of Demons_and_I in Twilight Waning
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This story is what I can only call a good story. The grammar is flawless, and the plot is unique as well. My only issue is that the three characters seem bland. Although they project different ideas, the way they dialogue makes me feel as though one person is talking as opposed to two or three. But that's just a minor issue, which I think is personal tbh... Besides that and the fact that some paragraphs seem repetitive, this book is golden. I'd love to see what becomes of it in the nearest future.
Twilight Waning
ALPHN
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Demons_and_I:Just helping a fellow brother out. If you have any things you need to point out about my book, let me know as well. Your book is really good
I'm here to thank you again for your honest and very accurate review. Especially about the characters, I've been thinking, alot, about the way they acted and I realized they haven't really made actions that set them apart from other characters. The dialogue could really use some work, and I'd have to really establish their places in this fictional world. Again, thanks for the review. I wouldn't be able to realize this without your thoughts.
Just helping a fellow brother out. If you have any things you need to point out about my book, let me know as well. Your book is really good
ALPHN:I'm here to thank you again for your honest and very accurate review. Especially about the characters, I've been thinking, alot, about the way they acted and I realized they haven't really made actions that set them apart from other characters. The dialogue could really use some work, and I'd have to really establish their places in this fictional world. Again, thanks for the review. I wouldn't be able to realize this without your thoughts.
That would be great! It's been a while since I've gotten a really constructive critique on my book đ¤§
ALPHN:Thanks! I will