Honestly, it's an incredible premise and such amazing potential, but it becomes a self insert about the authors dreams extremely quick, so if u like that, read. If not, I'd avoid it.
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LIKEkamidemond:I am currently rewriting this story. I would advice to read it after 20 days. all the plot holes and other things will will sorted out by then
they are already there yes but there are still mistake after the rewrite. I will .ow slowly move into each chapter and fix them
DRAVIDIAN:Are they sorted?
kamidemond:I am currently rewriting this story. I would advice to read it after 20 days. all the plot holes and other things will will sorted out by then