Review Detail of DvD_007 in Naruto The Untouchable (Completed)
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the problem with this fanfic is that the author gave him op powers. this has made for the battles the mc has to be boring and uninteresting. and he knows how to write battle scenes, the fight with Naruto vs Sasuke was honestly pretty good, but with mc they always end up being boring. and on the latest chapters it has become worse, now all of the sudden he went from being on the fairy tail world to somehow go to fighting Luffy 5th gear. this story has the problem that ff with op characters have, authors don't know how to balance an op character with way weaker world. MC has dragon ball powers and we all know that even at the lowest they were already planet busters, even when the mc is nerfed he is still stronger than everything in naruto, fairy tail and one piece.
Naruto The Untouchable (Completed)
kamidemond
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that's good because like I said you know how to write battle scenes, it's just the mc ones that become super boring. if you can fix the unbalanced power level then it'll become for me a better fanfic
kamidemond:I agree with that and thus pretty soon I will be changing the world. One piece should be a good world for this
DvD_007:that's good because like I said you know how to write battle scenes, it's just the mc ones that become super boring. if you can fix the unbalanced power level then it'll become for me a better fanfic