everything about this book is great. The sense of mystery at the start of school life like world building. My only problem is the too short and almost non-explanatory synopsis. Nice cover by the way.

I do like the way the author bring out the characters to life in my mind, the potentials this book as is clearly obvious, The pace is great and the chapters just want to make you keep on reading more

This review Is based only on the first chapter but in future I will probably edit It. Usually I give 5 stars in writing quality of evrything proceeds without errors in punctuations or grammars. In this case I would probably give 6 stars if It was possible: his descriptive sections are rich in the dictionary, and the introspective parts are detailed. It's a style I aspire to achieve in the future. The updates seem very frequent(one every around 12 h). The story development feels a bit slower with respect to other stories but that's normal given the attention given to the psychological side. In the first chapter the m.c. starting point surely isn't the best but the similarity in the color of the eyes already links him with a more "accomplished" character. The world background Is to be developed yet, since up to this point the various location are just the place of the protagonist's emotion. I'll probably edit in the future about this section

The story looked interesting. the plot , character and the story is written very nicely. I appriciate the author hard work. Loving it waiting for more chapters.

After catching up and reading the story thus far to chapter 15, I have concluded that the story is actually a pretty solid one. With the first 8 chapters dedicated as this type of extended prologue, it does take a minute for things to get properly rolling into the main story. The prologue does do a good job of establishing the constant tragedy in Zeph's first life. The main issue I came across personally is the fact that there were constant deaths in rapid succession of the main cast to the point that it undermined the final, tragic taking of Zeph's life. It is a solid path, but I personally believe that a freak accident, like what happened to his loved ones, would've served a better route. Yet, the route chosen has shown promise once he finally became reincarnated. The story does sell the reader on Zeph's story and his emotional Rollercoaster. It is obvious that their next world does function similar to a video game, which is a shame, but I am curious about how the power system and world are built up by the author. Zeph's reincarnated father mentioned that the politics there are tough, so I am curious if Zeph will be forced to put his sticky, little fingers in it. The story is also written rather well. Sometimes, the dialogue is a bit clustered in the body paragraphs, but it's manageable. I do appreciate the author interaction after the chapters. Continue on your path, I hope you have properly structured the plot going forward because I am interested in seeing where this one goes.

I was incredibly impressed with the quality of writing in this book. The language was beautifully crafted, and the descriptions were so vivid that I felt as if I was right there in the story. I was particularly impressed with how the author managed to convey such deep emotions and complex themes with such ease. Keep going author

The first chapter is a bit rush but I can see great thing ahead. If you bear about 5 chapter in my eyes, you will be the fan of this novel.

A cool cover overall, I'm just starting to read it, so I'll only say that the description intrigued me, and I'll definitely recommend the novel to my friend.