Item: The Cosmic Predator
Rating: 5

Paul_OkitoLv31yr

2023-04-26 18:52

Your book deserves a 5 star. The only nitpick is, The description in the beginning paragraph was quite to much... Sorry for saying it, but I love the middle part, it kind of had a very cool vibe. Love the story development. Joon-young is still in his development stage

The Cosmic Predator

Dark_Cosmos

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Dark_CosmosAuthor

Thanks a lot for pointing out my mistakes.

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