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2023-11-03 09:35

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Naruto: I'm not a Pervert!

Mr_Aizen
4.3
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Mr_Aizen
Mr_AizenAuthor

Well, here is my review guys. I know many think of the MC as a young master and it's a bit like that hahaha, I'll just say "character development" a lot of "character development" in the future.

1yr

DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

The author slices and splices multiple stories, alternate versions of them, and their laws of physics into basically one amalgamation of nonsense. basically excuses every absurd action in the story and justifies its existence. majority of paragraphs involving the story usually are followed up with some sparknotes of the; what, why, when, where, and hows. If not that it'll be fun facts or introspective monologs about the original worlds this reality is based off or his memories. it destroys any chance of immersion. Also, he was supposed to not have powers but he goes from Vin diesel in the first fast in the furious movie then three chapters later its fast in the furious 7 and Vin diesel is stomping and collapsing parking lots. the only law in this story is the Law of convenience. So if you don't care for any framework or actual foundation and are happy with just hanging on for dear life and seeing where this story takes you then its right for you. overall its not a bad story, grammar seems pretty great and its unique overall. MC is basically the trending WN MC but quirkier, basically his moral stance is he doesn't have one.

1yr
OhayoSenpai
OhayoSenpaiLv3

This story in summary is something like. There was a man who put hamburger In hotdog's bread and trying to sell it telling everyone that it's just a hotdog... Story is too confusing .You gave too much details on the start of the story about his family therefore just making room for your story progression but in the same time just making what everyone else make. You aim to heaven but you forgot that you are still on earth. Writing quality is okay, it some this are slightly better it would be 5 star. Updating Stability is ok. In your place I would change title. it's too confusing and it will only make some ppls hate your novel for confusing them and making them waste time .(like me)

1yr
Jacob_X
Jacob_XLv1

So interesting synopsis however I don't plan on reading it and am just leaving a review to encourage you to continue writing. ------------------------------------------------------------------

1yr
Garland
GarlandLv4

The story overall is both average and weird. With the title alone, it jusy screams that its a story for Oshi no Ko but then it starts with resident evil. It feels like the resident evil arc was just their to give him some before actually going to the Oshi no Ko parts. The sudden transfer from resident evil to oshi no ko is just a strange shift in both setting and feel that its just weird.

1yr
Klazy_Labbit
Klazy_LabbitLv5

The story has potential but the author keeps trying to do many things at once. I don't mind mixing diff worlds but the way it is done here is incoherent. The characters are the strong part of this novel as they are portrayed decently but feel a bit off at times. Also protag gets heavy nerfs to create fake tension and makes the book a hard read. Overall not a terrible book but it could have been better if it made a bit more sense.

1yr
FAP_Master_
FAP_Master_Lv6

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1yr
Makima_
Makima_Lv4

I didn't expect anything less from Aizen-sama, a simply amazing story, there are some mistakes but nothing too remarkable.

1yr
The_Dark_Hydrax
The_Dark_HydraxLv4

Please update this book and not your "I Stream DC in Marvel" which has become trash

1mth
GodOfLight
GodOfLightLv1

This story in summary is something like. There was a man who put hamburger In hotdog's bread and trying to sell it telling everyone that it's just a hotdog... Story is too confusing .You gave too much details on the start of the story about his family therefore just making room for your story progression but in the same time just making what everyone else make. You aim to heaven but you forgot that you are still on earth. Writing quality is okay, it some this are slightly better it would be 5 star. Updating Stability is ok. In your place I would change title. it's too confusing and it will only make some ppls hate your novel for confusing them and making them waste time .(like me)

1yr
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