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MiaSilver
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2023-04-16 02:50

Alright theres only a few chapters and its still the early stages, but there are some good things to note about the novel: 1)The background the author created for Shi Tian and Sheng Lan was not an info dump like most stories,it fitted in naturally with the narrative of the first chapter although it was a brief mention. 2)The imagery is quite vivid even from the short descriptions which is more prefferable than long descriptions that simply look like bulky text,The environment and world can be visualized quite clearly. 3)The MC thus far shows rational and calm thinking, definitely more likeable than some wn standard brainless MC, and he exudes a an appreciative sense of maturity. It fits with the passive skill he is given. 4)The author is just getting started, there is so much more to explore and i am thrilled to see how mysteries will unravel and the origins of the Great Disaster, The author has dropped subtle points as the event occurred, so i look forward to seeing how some truths will unfold 5)There is much for the MC to develop and grow and i can't help but anticipate the next moves and turns, the novel definitely deserves a read. BEST OF LUCK. ~The content of this review was written in complete safety and by the reviewer's will, sincerely not threatened by the Mafia.

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(chapter 1-2 spoilers) hmm after reading the first few chapters I'm not feeling it like there's the generic young master and he wanted to leave the lock down and they let him then mc came up and was like "I want to leave too and since you let him go I should be able to go" like that felt Goofy and why they even let the young master go it's called a lock down for a reason and monsters are outside, he's just gonna die but when others try to leave they're like nope and point their guns at them like huh they aren't hostages if they wanna kill themselves go for it then later they're like hey poison is outside so if the door is open everyone dies. ahh

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It's been almost 4 months, so I supposed it's time for me to write a review and let you all know what you're supposed to expect and not to expect in this novel. 1. Is this a heavy sci-fi element? Yes, it's meant to be a heavy sci-fi element, but if you haven't seen much of it yet, then please do be patient about it. I'm writing hard to develop things slowly and not just speed run or write hastily which could ruin the storyline. 2. Is the novel going to be about Mechanic? Yes, the main character, Shi Tian, also known as Nathan (alias), is a mechanic and more detailed explanation and aspect regarding the mechanic path would be explained as you gradually read more. 3. World building/info dumping? Yes and no, the world is still being constructed despite having 200chs+ already. I don't like to simply write a whole chunk of text filled with the world and info dumping, but gradually revealed them bits by bits, allowing the readers to digest the information. 4. Action-packed? Definitely, what kind of sci-fi doesn't have action packed? Keep in mind that the action/fighting would be different than most novels, given it's a Sci-fi, so weapons are advanced and might not even exist (at least in this current era), so don't attempt to go "how is this possible" or "that's impossible" on technologies that seemed far-fetched. 5. Romance Element? Currently not the main focus of the novel, so don't expect to see lovely-dovey moment or cute moment. There would be interactions between the Main character and numerous female characters, but the number will be kept in a ratio similar to the Main character interaction with other male characters. 6. I seemed to have read this kind of novel before... If you have this sense of deja vu, then you aren't wrong if you have read "The Legendary Mechanic" novel before. This novel is inspired from it, so there are elements that are similar, but the plotline is completely different. TLDR: Thank you for reading the novel, and I hope you enjoyed it. If you have any questions, feel free to comment below, but note, I might not give a clear answer for your questions depending on what it is.

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