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Sleds_WriterLv11yr
2023-08-09 19:21

The storytelling is good. The story can be interesting depending on what the author wants to do with it. I don't remember reading any vampire romance story with the partner having a hunter family background. This choice can add different interesting plots to the story. Not related to the novel in itself: I see that your cover isn't yours. If you can't make one yourself, maybe you should try using midjourney free trial to make one just for you.

Dark Bound Heart

Jena_Blackx
4.7
48 Chs

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Jena_Blackx
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I'm glad you like it. Thanks for the suggestion.

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MoonDream0
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I love 😍 this novel. Can't wait for the more updates.

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novelflix
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Seems like a nice story. I will surely give it a try after I'm done writing my own. But adding it to my list for sure.

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DARK_DEKU
DARK_DEKULv4

This is a great book and it is also the first book that I have read that it is a Nigerian that made it. I really recommend this book

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obiparadise_purity
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The story is interesting so far and I believe there is more to come. Everything is in place just some few grammatical error that can easily be corrected. I know the story is going to be so much fun with the characters in the book. Well done author, all the best.

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The_dark_rose14
The_dark_rose14Lv2

I really enjoyed this book, even though I'd just started i couldn't help but get pulled in. The story's pace is nice and it's really light hearted and funny. I'll definitely try to finish the book. Good job author.

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Sinbau
SinbauLv12

Good storytelling, pacing and introducing of the mc and important moments of the plot. There are a few grammatical issues but I don’t feel like it ruins the reading. Proof reading is an easy fix, I also wanted to suggest to split paragraphs to make it an easy reading. Nonetheless, the author is doing well with this novel and I can see potential- I look forward to seeing where this novel goes [img=recommend]

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SayofChains88
SayofChains88Lv1

Looking at your page can easily see you have a very nice cover which is always the first thing I look at and good synopsis that easily draws your reader in. Certainly spicy beginning here even after a few pages it feels like a comfort book making me wish the best for Leah and her hectic life.

1yr
ashk29
ashk29Lv4

I really this book. The pace is perfect for me to read. Leah is hard working girl though she has to be in her boss's tight hold for sometimes. Keep it up Author!

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AuthorTeemah
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Keep it, I really love, it is awesome, and the book cover, it is okay. 💓💕💓💕💓💕💓💕💓💕💕💓💕

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