Review Detail of Fox_king_1789 in Heroes: The Cancer of the Multiverse
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Honestly started off as one of the great works similar to many but the character of the Mc is extremely shaky and full of inconsistency and randomness. Like if the MC is growing socially it should follow that trend but no it suddenly devolves into childishness. Growing intelligence ok good it great but suddenly it like he is high but then again suddenly mastermind level genius wow. Sorry for the rant but to anyone who is gonna read it I WOULD DEFINITELY RECOMMEND IT BUT PLEASE BEAR WITH IT AFTER THE STARTING CHAPTERS. anyway i am not gonna quit this because the plot and everything else is interesting so KUDOS but i hope the character is more mature and show consistent growth towards intelligence for the second Arc. Start of first Arc 10/10 Middle of first Arc Meh End of First Arc 7/10 Overall Story and concept 9/10
Heroes: The Cancer of the Multiverse
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Thank you for the review. You might be right about the development being a bit shaky. As this is my first story, I struggled with the influence of socialisation on the mc (He was surrounded by children, so it was logical to adjust to that to a certain degree) and his mental state because of his situation. But as I didn't see it as such a glaring issue, I didn't pay to much attention to it. A mistake, it seems. But now that I know it, I will definitely pay attention to it in the second arc.