Review Detail of Yirikalische in Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

You are making story way worse by trying so hard. There is a good reason for so many similar novels to exist, because it works! Your starting template is similar to 'global lord' types, yet instead of following the fast paced formula, you write an extremely slow paced progression, which doesn't fit this sub-genre at all. Literally whenever ANYTHING happens, MC starts thinking about it for ungodly amount og paragraphs. Then he says something like "wait this is not important now", which I 100% agree, it is indeed not important in the slightest. And more importantly , MC feels WAY too clueless for someone who literally studied this world, this is not a transmigration novel. He even had high grades, how is he so flustered? In such an education system, he should already be completely familiar with everything and should be mentally prepared. I can tell that author is trying to make MC weak-willed so that he can change it afterwards and call it character progression, but it just doesn't work. The idea is cool, if you simply delete half of the text, or perhaps even a bit more than half, this could be a good novel.