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Review Detail of Shardul in Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

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Shardul
ShardulLv28mthShardul

dropped after chapter 131.author seems to forget things intentionally .some times the Mc is all knowledgeable .sometimes mc doesn't know the basic of things.dropped because the author tried to insert previous characters into the story out of nowhere.oh if u have plotholes one time ,I can understand but repeating the same mistakes a number times even when you have an audience giving u reviews of your work is unprofessional .had a lot of hopes for this one. but when illogical straits keep on stacking i can't continue this isnt the first popular novel I have dropped bcos of this detail.

Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

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Shardul
ShardulLv2Shardul

I didn't know that this is author self help and motivation forum site.I will keep that in mind.and what do you mean by keeps tracks of all characters ?according to the author himself the mc first army college was going to be getting applications from the " whole of human race "so why are the only two previous guys pitted against the mc once more.you're shaming me bcos i gave my opinion ??I say . you and cronies can fuck the right off ,,🖕

Tommy_Forreal
Tommy_ForrealLv3Tommy_Forreal

shame on you , nobody needs you here

Dexter_Sled_1111
Dexter_Sled_1111Lv4Dexter_Sled_1111

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Tommy_Forreal:shame on you , nobody needs you here
Dexter_Sled_1111
Dexter_Sled_1111Lv4Dexter_Sled_1111

The author simply keeps track of his characters that's all. why don't you try writing to see how hard it is... you didn't even give the author any credit... that's all you readers see... flaws. you can't see the good in some books.anyways.... have a nice day.