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Efthee
EftheeLv141yr
2023-07-11 17:08

Honestly I like it, it has quite a few errors, but I like the system, how he gets stronger and all. What I dont'tlike is this random arc of collecting characters. I know it's necessary but we really don't see much of MC's thought process and I think the official author is trying(forcing) us with a comedy gag of fairy tail destruction. like we get it, write something unique. so yeah I like the background I suppose but I don't like the direction story is going towards. p.s. be ready for a lot cringe words (all the talk between characters makes no sense)

Fairy Tail: Collapsing Stars

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