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2024-06-07 10:39

Like the story and the premise needs a better updating schedule needs to work on grammar

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I'm gonna give my review without actually giving a review as I can't do that since I'm a dummy. So lemme start with this. Seeing a flash fic made me happy but reading It I was disappointed, I guess. Let's start with the fact that the author decided to take away uhhh ( I forgot the mc's name, let's call him bob ). Anyways, The Author decided to take away Bob's memories so at that point he shouldn't even have bothered making a reincarnated person. And then the author split up Barry and Bob for no reason and put him with a family called the Danver family ( Sound familiar? Well that's cuz author decided to put the danvers { Minus Kara } Into earth 1, oh and Alex Is no long a l3sbi@n and Is d@ting bob } ). Then there's this really big timeskip with loads of things happening that weren't explained all that well. Bob meet's felicity and they do wrestling In b3d and they don't meet each other for long time. Bob meets Constantine and does some stuff that I don't remember. Bob apparently has 2 gf's and I have no clue who the 2nd one Is as It wasn't explained nor was there an actual romance to put him and Alex together ( Which I don't normally mind but the explanation of them getting together was done In like 2 paragraph's ). Uhh, that's about what I can remember. Anyways. I'm gonna continue reading as It's not a terrible book, but's It's not anywhere near to being good. Maybe me being awake at 4 am Is affecting my thinking capabilities but I'd probably just say this In less words If I was less tired.

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