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daoist_shaheer
daoist_shaheerLv41yr
2023-08-27 02:29

This is a great novel in here the mc catchs a lot pokemon he trains them there characters intruduce and great disgns character do things that make sense that align with there personalty the grammer is great my only complain is the story department which is the overall story is ashs connon journey just more smothe sailing and more varaitys he doesnt need to wait to progress he wants charmender so he is waiting which i get it as it is powerfull but there is no need to follow all the things of the story your ahead many months ahead so do other advanture or just challange a unofficial gym or go on a another advanture he knows the ss ship trouble so he doesnt need to go there it hasnt happend yet but the way you are following things he will go there which he doesnt so you change things other than that everything is great

Pokemon: Radical Redux

Katsu39
4.8
290 Chs

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Katsu39
Katsu39Author

Thanks and just to say something, I plan to skip a lot of things and add new adventures I'm just currently brainstorming as to how to do it without like introducing 20 OCs or something.

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daoist_shaheer
daoist_shaheerLv4

All the best than

Katsu39:Thanks and just to say something, I plan to skip a lot of things and add new adventures I'm just currently brainstorming as to how to do it without like introducing 20 OCs or something.
1yr
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Katsu39
Katsu39Author

Shameless obligatory author review, Upload schedule is currently Monday, Wednesday, and Friday. Stick around if you want a story that I don't completely know everything I'm going to do. So we're in this together.

1yr

Daoist5NUPPq
Daoist5NUPPqLv1

Love the novel dear author I have a question author, is this fanfic will keep going until to the galar region or is it only in Kanto? Just curious

1yr
Nyxio
NyxioLv4

Author is doing well. The story is going well and there are many new things which are different from cannon. I like that Ash is more likeable and a good trainer. The companions are also nice. I hope he trains all the Pokemon he catches as he has quite a few good ones.

1yr
Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

Very interesting Pokemon Novel. I realy like like how this version of Ash acts and that he is catching Pokemons OG Idiot Ash never even tried to catch.

1yr
SolemnFox
SolemnFoxLv4

5 stars simply for keeping the Wuxia/Xianxia BS cultivation system out of the story. Good Job

1yr
Natusumi
NatusumiLv4

Rating 5 stars just for the interesting concept, ever seen anyone look into the concept of Aura like this, and Ash's childhood is done in a interesting way.

1yr
MiBox_X4K
MiBox_X4KLv13

Give it a try 😉 It's cringe free, and you don't have to lose brain cells to read, and the author really had done extensive research on Pokemon moves and used it in battle how a trainer should use he just didn't spam moves .

1yr
DaoistFL4kQP
DaoistFL4kQPLv2

The story is good and since the author already said that the romance will start in Kalos I'm not very impatient, but if in the end it doesn't result in a harem with as many good waifu as Lilie, Dawn or Leaf, I'm going to get really depressed (google traductor)

1yr
Mr_mysterio
Mr_mysterioLv3

This novel reminds me of another one that has the same vibe but with a more emo touch. I'm glad I found this story............................

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SEven20
SEven20Lv2

Your Fanfic is one of the best Pokémon fanfics I read. There were others' but some of them were drop or didn't update anymore. I hope you finish your, since it has a lot of potential. Moreover, thank you author, we hope as readers can see and follow your work.

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