Review Detail of Tony_snow_Snow in Villain in the world of Naruto

I’m only going to talk about the writing in the story. First the grammar issues is not to the point where someone would drop the story because of it, but it still needs to be fixed, sometimes you don’t even know who’s speaking and that kinds of bugs me out. Second is the switch between writing styles, one moment it’s quotation marks when someone speaks and the next moment is dashes, IT DOESN’T MAKE SENSE. But the story does have potential.