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djmac76
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It is a decent story however after chapter 70 I lost complete interest. I had hoped for a Fairy Tail fanfic strictly in that universe, but the AU elements to the story ruined it.

Fairy Tail: Metal and Threads

SixthSense1029

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It was mentioned in chapter 2 that there would be crossovers. But I'm sorry you feel that way.

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It's fine if there's crossovers, but the problem is that there's too much of them. It would have been better if you picked you favorite ones, just 1 or 2 max. 3. From what I can tell there's like 5-6 crossovers and I only read 80 chapters and seen some future chapter titles to get a grasp where the story is going. What I mean is, do you really need to do that? FT has many waifus and a pretty big story line to focus on, there's really no need to add to it so much more, so I think that you went overboard with 'additions' to the story and it slowed down the canon FT progression to a crawl. Also, the FML at the start is a menace, was really hard to read about her antics and MC passivity towards them. But you made it better with Erza's reality slap))

SixthSense1029:It was mentioned in chapter 2 that there would be crossovers. But I'm sorry you feel that way.